Is It Pornography Comments

i liked Poet's Notes also.

I was chasing my heart, .........this made me laugh. i couldn't help myself. (not a large laugh, mind you) 'I couldn't swim, I couldn't fly, supper time here, and i've said about enough anyway. i really enjoyed and tried my best to find pornography; i think i might have succeeded here and there! to MyPoemList. bri :) I just walked.' ........................i got a MUCH louder laugh here! :) :)

Verily, everything has its limit and bonds and if a thing is out of its limit and bond, it loses its identity and function, Just as the heart when was displaced from its limit and bonds, lost its identity and became dysfunction. Verily, with an amusement, the poem brings out the reality of the heart that is dislodged by a dislodged person. A lovely poem conveying a lovely message for the lovely readers. Loved reading and commenting.......10

Wonderful poem with funny touch, I thoroughly enjoyed it......10

Very provident and wonderful poem so wisely presented. Thanks for sharing such a brilliant one. ....10

ENJOYABLE WRITE, QUITE AMUSING

I enjoyed reading the poem as the narrative was quite captivating. I don't see anything quite like what the title wants us to believe. Wonderful poem.

This is a wonderful, imaginative poem with great visualizations. Your mind is gold, Akhtar. Thank you