Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Is It I Comments

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Is it I you are looking for
here i am patiently waiting
smiling in the dark not to be
seen by any other being here i am
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Charity Nduhiu
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John Ugolo Umah 19 September 2014

I sense in this poem that, the poet has found her heart desire and have summitted to him, yes, it feels so great to fall in love... Thank you Charity for this great write.

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Akhtar Jawad 11 September 2014

A beautiful YES, that brought smile even on my lips, a charming poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2014

A nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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