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great sense of humour, terse and also wry wit. good going Vaibhav.10 Mamta
tersely said, nicely said. your mental growth is higher than your age. cheers
lolz....this s very beautiful.., , , so, what happen to miss gravity now? ...i like your attitude..hehehheheh....
such a beautiful way to writereall like it! thaks for sharing
Astute succinct penning...Now, on the other hand, had you chosen to use the preposition 'ON', instead of 'TO', on the 1st line.......management may have gotten to this poem before us, and we would have never had the chance to enjoy it! lol! F j R 2009
A humerous little piece Vaibhav, well done. Best wishes, Andrew
Very amusing. For the smile you have given me, I give you a ten in return. Kindest regards, Sandra
By just three lines you have all the comments gravitating to your poem. Great keep it up. Narayanan