Saturday, July 24, 2010

Is It Gone? Comments

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Is it gone? Is it Silent? My pulses beat
What is it a mock trick of the brain
Yet not, I thought I saw her stand
As a shadow, a speechless phantom with awe at my feet
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Nero CaroZiv
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Kim Barney 06 January 2015

Nice, but in the last line I think you meant BREATHE instead of BREATH.

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