Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Wednesday, February 27, 2013

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I was in rage and unable to control
He is the only son and not responding call
Totally ignorant about studies and failure
I am worried about his studies and future
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 March 2013

Heather Burns, Abdul Wahab and Floy Dy Ra like this. View 1 more comment Tribhawan Kaul It is so poignant and depressing. Don't gauge what goes in the minds of these young ones. A slight rebuke, small failure in exams, small bad incident make them take drastic steps. Now a days every child needs counseling. Thursday at 8: 05pm · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2013

Seen by 3 Verona Knight Cole Ford and Gloria Rodikis like this. Verona Knight Cole Ford This had my visuals working.36 minutes ago · Unlike · 1 Gloria Rodikis Hasmukh this is an informative poem but very sad! 9 hours ago via mobile · Like · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 February 2013

sounds well written Stanley Small14 hours ago its sad t hear that anyone could fall t such a substance, but that's a fact of this world, I hope you have a great world that forms around your self. have a great one. later

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2013

: -) Tennessee Love9 hours ago I always adore when a poet ends the poem with a question. It has you thinking on your toes about what you have just read and maybe to some feels like its asking you to apply it to your life. Very well written my friend Comment +1 Love it Joe Moe9 hours ago I can feel the emotions. Comment +1 emotions pooring out Amanda Dawson9 hours ago Emotions for sure pooring out in need of some help or guidance. Comment +1 I Like It Thomas Benveniste9 hours ago Not Much Else To Say That I Truly Like This Piece Comment +1 wow Shannan Stephens Avriett9 hours ago amzingly moving poem... Comment +1 ok raymond kurilavicius9 hours ago i thought it was ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 February 2013

I was in rage and unable to control He is the only son and not responding call

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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