Saturday, February 17, 2018

Is It Dark Or Light Beautiful The Most? Comments

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Whose beauty doth reach thee first?
Whom doth I appreciate first and whom the next?
Is it dark or light beautiful the most?
Whom to ask? Whom to be answered from?
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Adokshaja Madhav
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 June 2020

Thou seem to be as closest as my breath And as farthest as my unknown death. So dost thy name Truth: The eternal. the Truth and the Eternal is God himself........ you are praising God and convinced that you have found God...... very well written poem. tony

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 30 July 2019

THIS POEM IS UR BEST AND TO GET MORE TO READ DO COMMENT AND THANK OTHERS ITS THE FIRST STEP TO SUCCESS YOU HAVE ALREADY TAKEN THE FIRST STEP TO COMPOSE NOW READ ME ALSO AND OTHERS THEN BEES WILL COME TO HONEY SAID THE QUEEN B

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Adokshaja Madhav 30 July 2019

Thank you sir! ! . The 'thank' is of not this sort but else! ! Keep writing back for it does fill my heart with much of motivation! !

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Jazib Kamalvi 17 February 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Adokshaja. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Adokshaja Madhav 17 February 2018

Yup both exist...leaving behind a mark of ambivalence in the hearts of beholder...as with me.

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Rini. 17 February 2018

An interesting poem..I agree with Bernard, beauty of light is sen only if there is dark

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Bernard F. Asuncion 17 February 2018

Both exist... When there’s no dark, there’s no light..... such an interesting poem👍👍👍

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