Thursday, May 31, 2012

Is It A Key? Yes Its Comments

Rating: 5.0

The key to open doors of Heaven is.....
The residues of river flows on fertile lands is.....
Your pulse rate when a doctor says 'No problem' is....
The moonbeams in chalk smokes when a sir claims 'No class' is....
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swetha vankayalapati
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Yes yes! Precisely i love everything about this write, at first i thought it was a trivia or a quiz, but the marvell went and on and on to impress and interest me along each line, and felt the vanity of appreciation in this write, thank you, you proved once again why you are so the best, thanks , the joys of a enjoying a pleasantly well shared write to a fellow one is....... The_African_Son

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Heather Wilson 17 July 2012

Interesting writing, thank you, I enjoyed the read.

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Oludipe Oyin Samuel 13 July 2012

Good style; made me race instinctively through the lines from start till it brought me to an undisclosed end

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Valerie Dohren 09 June 2012

Very good piece of poetry.

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Kasia Fedyk 05 June 2012

Yes, so very true. Beautiful poem Swetha. Greatness is helping loving and never expecting anything in return, words of wisdom Swetha. No conditions! Love it! I give you a 10!

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Kee Thampi 01 June 2012

a book on the rosy land to cover our soul

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