Wednesday, May 7, 2008

Is It A Crime? (C) 5-7-08 Comments

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Is it a crime for me to love you the way I do
Is it a crime for me to have a lust for you
Well if it is then have me arrested and sent to jail
Put me on trial but they all shall fail
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Carol Gall 06 October 2009

good write corey 10

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a challenger poem! ! ! is not a crime to love crazily but it s rather a mad...

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Joseph Poewhit 19 February 2009

The crazyness of the question is mixed well with the crazyness of the poems points of view.

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Howard Johnson 07 May 2008

I love how it all twists together, Thank you for writing Corey

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