I've been thinking about Heaven
And still hoping to get in,
But I wonder if it's worth it,
Giving up our sex and sin.
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I love it, a brilliant poem, I don`t really know what`s in heaven, doubt if anyone does. But you wrote a good poem while you are still on earth.
Well, I'm not a God person myself believing that Heaven and Hell are states of being on earth, so as long as we do no harm to others and bear in mind that people are more important than things, I guess the thoughts expressed in your poem are okay (have you read mine entitled Heaven and Hell) . Very good poem, amusing and well written.
Lol. In light of this world, I'd give up anything to get into heaven. And that's no joke. A great Write. Thanks for sharing.