Is God Partial? Comments
God, Supreme Being known to all.
His existence years before man's invention.
The church says He is a Lord of perfection.
When you walk through darkness and Him you call,
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This is good work...A stellar display of contemporary free-verse...Powerful storyline, and you deliver it well...~FjR~
yes.When we suffer we feel like this.I liked it.Toheeb.Keep writing.
Hm-m! The inquisitiveness lurks in every mind; and yet you've done a great job in justifying the issue. Great job! Poignant write!
The poem is very good, but lacks in the use of proper english. Yet you can clearly read what you want to say and it gives of your emotions spendidly, good job.
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7/21/2025 10:39:37 AM # 1.0.0
I like this one! Toheeb, there are reasons for everything..you'll know one day.