Is Evil Thy Name? Comments

i shall put this now into my/our January 2018 showcase, by and for PH poets. if you are unfamiliar with the showcases, just ask me about them. your name shall be mentioned twice. i may also make note of some typos which PH may have made in your poem. (to be continued) .... bri

I especially enjoyed: Her eyes deep as pitch and fiery as brimstone, looked into his closed soul and she smiled her smile- irascible and mocking, but to a weak subject -radiant and alluringly shy. Where can i hook up with her? ? ? Bri :)

I am using tablet so shaĺl be brief. Some words i don't know, but will not look up. Instil or instill? Some inconsistency in verb tenses i think, near ending. BUT a 'LOVELY' story. To MyPoemList.