Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Is Eternity Enough Forever? Comments

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He said he would love me for eternity.
But is eternity enough forever?
He said he would never leave me agian,
For it was the biggest mistake of his life.
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Kenzie Lynn
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Valora Krown 03 February 2009

Can be said this poem is good and even interesting but still i think there is something missing. What i like is the repeating of this curious question - 'Is eternity enough forever? '

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Shakti Shetty 15 April 2008

you have given eternity a new search for meaning.......good concept and good try. keep up the good work. rgds

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