Shhhhh.....stay quiet
There is big medicine in being reverent
Around Medicine Wheel
One must esteem this place, son of my son
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I am from N. Dakota, this poem really resonates the American Indian plight. Your images are very rich and you have n original voice. thank you.
Barbara, a unique poem with a real Native American feel. Interesting how the buffalo jerky seemed an inadaquate sacrifice... I could certainly see how this might be the case, obviously you wouldn't want to offend. Good write! Brian
Very unique poem, the setting and story are quite entertaining, food for thought, so to speak. -chuck
your poem caught my fancy......keep writing