Saturday, September 3, 2005

Irritate Comments

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Stomach clenched in angry knot
resentment fills each and every thought
a peaceful haven I do seek
to hide away from intensive heat
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Alc Harris
anger Frustration
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Kelly Allen Vinal 03 September 2005

Well done, Ms. Harris!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 03 September 2005

Please see your inbox. H

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Enemacles Redux 03 September 2005

This is really good, Amanda! I enjoyed both the clever rhyme and the unfolding descriptions of this irritable state.. a few of which are not unfamiliar to myself! ! I thought maybe the use of 'does' in line 8 was a touch melodramatic.. even for such an irate narration... but thats just my opinion... I enjoyed, thanks!

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Alc Harris

Alc Harris

England
Alc Harris
Alc Harris
England
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