Thursday, December 18, 2008

Irrepressible Love. Comments

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After years, repressive relationships
Are reputed to stifle all need.
Dull acquiescence takes full control, whips
Until dead the tenderest soul, feeds
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Fay Slimm
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ngaio beck 29 December 2008

More beautiful wisdom for the romantically challenged. Mea Culpa!

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Bob Blackwell 20 December 2008

Fay, I agree undying permanent love is great, it has no doubts, worries or despairs.

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Tom Balch 18 December 2008

Life is strange, and so is love, nice piece Fay,10 from Tom

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Kris Smith 18 December 2008

When you are ageless love gets every chance to rekindle, take that chance enjoy I say Top write my friend 10 +++ Chris

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Fiona Davidson 18 December 2008

How very true Fay...enjoyed this poem very much...thank you

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Fay Slimm

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