Friday, November 18, 2005

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When night's veil slowly lifts
And moonlight shines through the mist

Deep in the stillness of Irissed pools
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Wayne Guy Butterfield
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Sallie Howson 21 November 2005

calming vision. lovely poem. welcome to the site i look forward to reading more

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Cj Heck 18 November 2005

Lovely thoughts, Wayne, and very nice imagery to carry the theme. Warmest regards, CJ

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Jon Lloyd 18 November 2005

Nice internal rhymes and alliteration. Another great poem. Jon.

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