Friday, July 10, 2009

Ironic Differences Comments

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I feel tired, I feel bare,
I feel unusual, I feel guilt,
I’m filled with remorse,
There is this deep compunction in me.
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Nashy Lamen
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Danzen D. 16 July 2009

I'm very sure you're aware you are constantly making mastpieces (yup, emphasis on the pieceS) , but in case you don't, here I am saying YOU ARE, hehe I could only give an appraising thumbs-up, and I hope that would say everything -grins-. Keep writing! *thumbs-up*

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Deborah Cromer 10 July 2009

Intensely complexed, but purely simple too. You have alot going on here. Wow. More than most and all at the same time too, huh? This is a different kinda poem, but so well put. You write it like it is. Nice work. DC

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