Saturday, December 30, 2006

Iraq Today Comments

Rating: 5.0

bulldog faced
bulldozed, face
flattened, dried
and creased
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john tiong chunghoo
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This is great poetry, very spare, each word selected carefully, just enough to say exactly what you want with no excess. Loved reading this. L&T

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Raynette Eitel 30 December 2006

This is truly your best, John. Each word has depth. Each image gives the reader a glimpse into a troubled place, a terror-filled country, and your last stanza shows what beauty there once was...and hopefully might be again. Raynette

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Otteri Selvakumar 30 December 2006

today iraq write a true... My kiss of your hands...

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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