Friday, July 20, 2007

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Two dreams vaporized into dust,
Two nations displayed cold eyed lust.
Two kids played in the sand that day,
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rakesh jaddu
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Raveendran . 20 July 2007

Well focussed on your theme, thank you for sharing.

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Soul Writer 20 July 2007

Hardcore reality, i like the opposing sides and the flow. Keep up the writing Soul

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David dfsg 20 July 2007

War is and always will be a terrible thing, sometimes its necessary, but it will always be avoidable. Well written.

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