...a stone should be
thrown back to the water
to regain its luster.
And when the sun
...
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Ah, Candice: Your inward thoughts drift through this one and leaves us seeing a dream within a dream. Adeline
soul never be drown...life never surrender...only hope for you to fill up the heart and the soul that survive....the inward in you...very beautiful poem you give...thank you and God bless....a 10+++++
i can't say i understand your poems but i always sense a feeling of anticipation of something beautiful or terrifying... or both...
'the fallacy of words'.... I like that. The second stanza is particularly good.
your inward thoughts reminded me the 2 sides of the circle, 'inside' and 'outside' :)