Saturday, May 2, 2009

(! !) Inward Comments

Rating: 5.0

...a stone should be
thrown back to the water
to regain its luster.
And when the sun
...
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Alice Cuenca
COMMENTS
Ying Escalona 14 September 2009

your inward thoughts reminded me the 2 sides of the circle, 'inside' and 'outside' :)

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Adeline Foster 03 August 2009

Ah, Candice: Your inward thoughts drift through this one and leaves us seeing a dream within a dream. Adeline

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Antonio Liao 04 May 2009

soul never be drown...life never surrender...only hope for you to fill up the heart and the soul that survive....the inward in you...very beautiful poem you give...thank you and God bless....a 10+++++

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Sonya Florentino 03 May 2009

i can't say i understand your poems but i always sense a feeling of anticipation of something beautiful or terrifying... or both...

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Rory Hudson 02 May 2009

'the fallacy of words'.... I like that. The second stanza is particularly good.

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Ency Bearis 02 May 2009

nice verses..superb write...meaningful....10

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