Invoking Love Comments

You identified this as a dramatic monologue and well it deserves the title dramatic because a drama unfolds over its four stanzas and is resolved in the closing couplet welcoming EROS who fully deserves his epithet MAJESTIC after the heroic build-up to his arrival. In fact, I think the true heroism evoked by your poem lies not in that figure but rather in the energy of belief expressed in the words which summoned him. Yours is the creative force which gives substance to Eros.In the first stanza only your eyes see the threatening monsters, by extension it is your voice of Desire which summons the exciting arrival of the rescuer in the 2nd and 3rd stanzas. At very least your words pave the way for his descent into the world, and guide his journey to self - you who will fulfill his raison d'etre just as he rescues his summoner. This is a grand Romantic poem! !

Come magnificent, mighty power, And in flames my heart devour! Like flames consuming fire wood, I see Love descending down and setting you afire! Powerful diction....Strong expression of passion! Great job Mihaela!

High speculation. Excellent collocation. A beautiful poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.

Extraordinary writing! ! ! Rich with vocabulary it has nice flow and rhythm.Loved it.

Rescue me! With the muse of your sweet love. Nice work.