Tuesday, February 12, 2019

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The river flows where no one knows,
around your shins and through your toes.

A breeze is blowing through your nose
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Troy Cochran
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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2019

Smooth flow and sweet wording of this poem motivate reader. This is a nice poem with nice title.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 February 2019

River flows with blowing breeze. We notice this flow and tenderness we feel totally. Little light still gives momentary strength to get success. A lovely poem of change you have penned with broader theme. This is an excellently penned poem. This is nice to see you after long time.....10

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Troy Cochran

Troy Cochran

Toppenish, WA
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