Sunday, August 12, 2012

Invisible Wings Comments

Rating: 2.6

In what power do I stand
covered in cloths of colors
embracing my flesh with threads
God's breath filling my soul
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Kasia Fedyk
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Charles Jagongo Ogola 16 August 2012

This is very inspirational. I like this poem.

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Captain Cur 16 August 2012

Kasia, a one of a kind write. Such beautiful and inspiring prose, uplifting, spirtual and heartfelt. Just wonderful.

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Marcus Mckinley 15 August 2012

a beautiful day at the beach can only change when it rains. and sarrows can only mend when tears are shed. dry your eyes and dry your wings for bees can not fly in the rain.

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Valsa George 15 August 2012

A beautiful poem.....! Profound with lofty spiritual undertones! !

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Godfrey Morris 14 August 2012

Lovely, spiritual and inspiring write

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Valerie Dohren 14 August 2012

Your beliefs shine through in this poem Kasia, lovely write.

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Chris Blazo 14 August 2012

I see the strong love for what you believe.

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Unwritten Soul 14 August 2012

I loved it, this will be my last poem that i read before having long rest for weeks and yes sure i will remember the precious thoughts here, the last poem that will help me refresh me easier, write more poem to keep inspiring us Kasia...and stay happy ]]Enjoyed and enjoy everyone! :) _Unwritten Soul

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Hamid Negah 14 August 2012

Kasia, really Your poetry is inspiring.

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Robert Wynn 14 August 2012

I can see it, see you there and see your wings, you are an angel you know. Please sign the guest book on my web page. betterthingsbegin.com and thanks.

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Neela Nath Das 12 August 2012

We should be under the celestial control of God Almighty. If we dedicate our each and every deed at the altar of God, we will not feel burdened.Kasi, this poem is the mirror of your pure soul.

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Payal Parande 12 August 2012

so beautiful i think even the word.... beautiful...is being less in front of this stunning piece...... may god bless you with everything..... love you, payal

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