Invisible Sorrows Comments

Wonderfully you have delineated this poem regarding natural disasters beginning from the wave of song. You have rightly stated that Nature has its own strategy to maintain its balance. Brilliant work. Thanks for sharing.

Wow! Love this stunning write with deep meaning and great imagery! !

You have expressed the deep sadness when a disaster has occurred. A brilliant poem dear Sekharan.

It is humane, to empathise with others. Only humans have the capacity to feel the sorrow of another person as his own. Your poem, I believe, is born of your empathy towards all those who are affected by Fani. And “Fani” (ഫണി) means serpent. So, it spews venom... Nice imaginative write. Enjoyed reading...

Fani, formed in the ocean Yelled into cyclone Wiped away the happiness And the waves of sorrows Deepens into the absolute darkness Into the wings of winter...very beautiful poem Truthfully expressed..10++++++

Songs, create waves Waves of the song brings me The pain of summer nights And darkness deepens Into the absolute sorrows Of invisible sadness... ... beautiful line dear poet..

Yes..nature has its own way to maintain balance. carniverous animals feed on hervivorous animals.Fani brought immeasurable sufferings to the people of Odisha when lakhs of people lost their houses..property, crops and cattle in the severe cyclone Fani though fewer human.lives were lost in comparison to to its severity because of alertness before hand to evacuate people to safer places. Thanks for sharing your concern through the poem.

A wonderful, poetic look on a devastating natural phenomenon

this was a cyclone kind saved much of humanity green rose must praise