Tuesday, April 2, 2019

Invisible Rope Comments

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I know I walked away
I couldn't stay, you know that
We two are better apart
We may not see it, still
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Jennifer Birchall
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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 November 2022

We may not see it, still That invisible rope That is keeping us tied...so true dear poetess. I like this very cute poem.

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Amir Marandi 04 April 2019

Bitter truth. Great poem.

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Jankovic Zoran 02 April 2019

When something invisible bind the two, they have a big dilemma. They need to be careful. Perhaps their freedom will bring sorrow.

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Prabir Gayen 02 April 2019

I know I walked away I couldn't stay, you know that We two are better apart We may not see it, still That invisible rope That is keeping us tied Will be cut one day Only then maybe, we'll both be free.. Very beautiful

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