Invisible Pain Comments

i know what you mean i liked it i could really relate...! ! ! !

Technically speaking, this is an excellent poem, well written and good flow. The content is touching and innocent, how lovely to hear the thoughts of the young, certainly brings back memories. I remember those days, I believe I was the other person that someone thought they could never have when all the while my thoughts were the same as there's. One must learn to read the language of the body, the twinkle of the eyes and the slight subtle smiles. How wonderful it is to grow old with the fabulous memories of youth. Keep writing my young friend.----Melvina

there are really times that love are better left unsaid even if we dont want it that way...we're left with no choice....i love this poem, i can relate.....*hugs*...-catty-

love it its true about me too i know how u feel brandi

ooo that so painfull..and u know is touch ma heart i know wat r u talking abt