Invisible Me (Kyrielle) Comments
Invisible me / Suspicion
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Shadowed existence in my mind
Is impossible to define
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Excellent kyrielle. Fun to do but the repetitive line had best be a good one. This one was.
I love the last stanza....and the whole piece is brought together nicely with the repitition of 'invisible me you don't see'...nice work
the first two lines eye catching...read good...the repeated use of line 'me you do not see' goes very well with the shadowed existence, spoken of there...a very good poem on love tending to loose support on sagging pillars cold...ten for you TJ
Wonderful Tj, Your construction of sentences is fantastic. A touching poem. Thanks.
Excellent piece TJ well expressed you are doing well my friend Chris 10 Chris
your words are so strong & you put them together so very well - this is a very good piece 10
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7/22/2025 10:33:59 PM # 1.0.0
Super excellant poetic expression. You made it a poem dear James.