Monday, May 28, 2012

Invisible Kiss Comments

Rating: 5.0

You may touch me.

I can't wait for something to happen.
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Marieta Maglas
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Ramesh Rai 22 June 2012

Since long I was thinking to read this poem to realise your feeling. Really, a nice touch. I appreciate and honor this poem. A great tribute to all the lovers. xlent. superb.

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Segun Johnson Ozique 16 June 2012

Mystery, surely, tinge of misery for the yearning in absenteeism...the sort of poem, words I like to eat. Poem is no poem to me without meaning. I think I know how you feel, yet...I think...I know not, , , yet

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We can eat this long wait Instead of making love This trsyt sauteed in poison of absence has consumed hungers for hungers Let's wait for another time when stars spin out of axis World is birthed afresh I shall then kiss you On our way out of heaven

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Ken E Hall 10 June 2012

Nice touch to the greatest cure on earth...love, I had to smile I read 'Certainly we need to eat together'.as each other... regards

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Dhivya Thiyagarajan 09 June 2012

You are expressing the love nicely

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Heather Wilson 09 June 2012

A beautiful thought and poem in Invisible Kiss, waiting for love. all yet a mystery.

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Prateep Sengupta 05 June 2012

There is both romanticism and mystery that make the poem extra-ordinary. Thanks for sharing.

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Ramesh Rai 31 May 2012

nice, i like this invisible kiss. the true sense of love.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

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