Thursday, March 26, 2020

Invisible Invasion Comments

Rating: 4.9

Overnight, very discreetly
Very quietly we come to life
Nobody sees us, betrays us
We invade host after host
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Laurie Van der Hart
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Bri Edwards 21 May 2023

Laurie, I Promise to RID THE WORLD of all 'disease, sickness', etc..................as soon as you return to PH. But I don't recall if your poems were any good. Were they? ? ? ? bri ;) PH IS better now.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 November 2022

Fascinating poem, excellently written, a Masterpiece dear Poetess! Myriad Stras for all your poems, they are finest I ever read

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 September 2021

Part 3. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. Full score

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 September 2021

Part 2: shall cease to exist. But nature will survive, though it may not be conducive for many life-forms, including human beings to live.

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Unnikrishnan E S 07 September 2021

"We are winning/We shall inherit the earth/And then we too/will die." Very true. Whether viruses, bacteria or dinosaurs. Or even Human Beings. Those who play with the balance of life, of earth, of environment…

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2020

2 - to MyPoemList I read: " Mushrooms Song by Sylvia Plath" & liked your poem, including title, more. bri :)

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2020

1- favorite lines: " We jump like fleas Over land and seas With ease" AND your Poet's Notes also; i hope all read it. I like your attitude. I hope the 'virus' doesn't do more harm in ways, e.g. economic, other than illness and death. But a 'scientific' experiment can't be done to decide if more " precautions" are better than fewer, for mankind. (cont.)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 July 2020

Fascinating poem, dear Renéé. True enjoyable. I was just having a bit of fun either like you. Thank you so much for sharing. Please keep your pen wet and the ink flowing. Your poems are truly fantastic one by one, always with a bit of humor. Stay safe!

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Bharati Nayak 23 May 2020

Nice to see you Laurie Van der Hart. The invisible invader has wrought havoc on this earth.But I wish we will win. Be safe and fine with your beautiful poems.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2020

Cont/.. I don't see ads much except one on top, and this is a great site and so you should continue writing on here. Kudos for the apt great poem above, take care! Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest prose titled, ' miraculous birds witnessed in sacred sanctuary"

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2020

Oh dear because we all enjoy your poems and this too such an awesome one on the corona pandemic, I do so hope you overlook and ignore the ads and go on to express poetically as you do. Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest prose titled, ' miraculous birds witnessed in sacred sanctuary"

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Clinton Siegle 20 April 2020

Fungus now are eating the radiation in Ukraine. Fungus now live in our shoes. Thank you for your poetry. It speaks about life living on. even if in the end we all are dust in the wind.

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Yehualashet Teshome 13 April 2020

Thank you Laurie. Very true. It touches the current situation and mainly the helplessness of arrogant, of the insignificant.

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Darwin Henry Beuning 31 March 2020

Laurie, Welcome back to PoemHunter! ! ! Looking forward to more of your lovely poetry! ! ! !

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Kim Barney 29 March 2020

Laurie, Dear Friend! It's good to see you finally posting a new poem again! This is a wonderful portrayal of the way the Corona virus has changed everyone's life recently. Great work! I am going to mention it in my Puzzle Master Quiz 050, to be posted the day after tomorrow. One of my recent poems is called " Avoiding the Corona" . I think you will like it.

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