Monday, May 28, 2012

Invisible Gods Whims Comments

Rating: 5.0

Ponderous, we travel curving lines
In ever widening circles, unknowing
That the curl of space fools us, the arc of time laughs
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Patti Masterman
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Smoky Hoss 31 May 2012

the waters are deep and dark, and from whence the life boats shall arrive has yet to be fully known... I love the feel of this poem.

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Eric Cockrell 29 May 2012

treading infinite waters with mortal arms flailing!

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Johnathan Juarez 29 May 2012

i love spirals too love i love the reeled in....... waiting for god's whim anticipating. iv'e been like that before. its cool u wrote about that.

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