Friday, October 9, 2015

Invisible Faces Of Depression Comments

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Stepping into depths of basic sadness, darkness engulfing
everything, even shadows can no longer be seen anywhere.

Feelings of intense devastation fall upon the heaviness
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 09 October 2015

This is one of your heaviest poems, and it hardly moves forward toward a vision of blessedness. You are too honest to give false hopes. Sometimes we just must accept a degree of failure in completing our missions. Not in any lasting sense, but in the temporary sense of needing a break BEFORE collecting the energy for a final sortie into the unknown.That's what happens despite the best intentions. In the simplest terms you need a break.Music, Food, Companionship - it's all restorative.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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