Invisible Beauty Comments

A beautiful and straightforward write that conveys kindness and love woven by one who has a compassionate heart. Top marks! ! ! ¿

Poetry is an encompassing and diverse art. A Poet can explore varied themes and areas. Yes, the insight of the brilliant Poet is indeed commendable.. Invisible beauty must be given emphasis in our writings to understand humanity better.

A wonderful and meaningful poem. A noble call to make our pen soar to the realm of the unknown and the beauty of those who are seldom or not even recognized.

The poem has got some inner beauty

How very deeply felt! Beautiful and noble, Words that uphold The kindness Of an extraordinary And ever compassionate Soul.

A wonderful poem my friend! 5 stars

part 1 I thank you all for your rare and beautiful comments. I agree with you all. Sometimes we feel some type of spiritual beauty and do not see it, or for example we can see a sunset scene affecting us, and if we ask ourselves why we like it and what is the reason?

part 2 then we cannot answer, and the meta-physical world is very vast world for poets to discover and create in it, decorate their texts with it, thanks again for your comment, I do apology for not answering on time because of the delay of appearing the comment

Whatever, this is beautifully conveyed and of such refined thoughts. No matter in what position we are, when the words come, we call them poetry Invisible Beauty we cannot explain, we must feel it deepest within. This poem mesmerized me, dear poet Soran. You have captured the poet's inspiration crystal clear and cutest. Excellent poem.5 stars.

Really a profound and insightful bit of verse nicely put together. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

This is an exhortation to all poets to depart from cliches and hackneyed expressions! A longing for the past also is there in most of the poems. I know it is there in my poems! Instead of finding beauty in the moon and stars, learn to find beauty on a wrinkled face. Instead of retiring to the past, learn to live in the present and accept its challenges. In my opinion, this is a beautiful and meaningful poem, Soran!

Liberate your pen from nostalgia- - - - - -> now that is a well-turned well-expessed well-done line! ! ! ! Succinct, lovely word choice, and a call to action at the same time! ! !

Don't you dare remove this very intelligent and instructive poem. Grrrr! The first four lines are very poetic..... I like the insertion of a one line stanza..... the last four lines is a call for creativity that creates a desire within the reader to do just that. If you want to fiddle with it, go ahead but leave this poem up and rename your 2nd poem. Please! ! ! 10

And your note clarifies all doubts. I write what I feel and sometimes surreal and philosophical. Again I say well written 10+

A brave call, believe me I have written so many poems on social injustice, human sufferings, liberation etc but you don't find readers for it since we all come across such things in our daily life and we all being humans we feel their pains, sorrows, sufferings etc and we want to forget it as quickly as possible hence we look for some alternate which will please or ease our tensions. Your poem is very good.

Hats off to your insight. Can't agree more. Let's search the treasure in the purest souls.10++

Its quite good. The message i get is move away from cliches and find fresh metsphors and imaginery to keep poetry interesting. I agree.