Wednesday, May 6, 2009

Invisible Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her hair covered her face, her cheeks flaming red.
He watched her curiously wondering what was going on in her head.
Her whole presence was negative, her aura miserable.
He couldn’t understand how this stunning girl wanted to be invisible.
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Sarah Mc Cabe
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Ency Bearis 06 May 2009

a superb write and a wonderful poem..so dramatic...nice...10

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Rommel Mark Marchan 06 May 2009

it reflects how short life is that we need to treasure every moment with our love ones

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rago rago 06 May 2009

a fantastic write..........she took her breath of her new life and knew she`d finally been found.........really marking write. Thanking you for your kind sharing.

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Sarah Mc Cabe

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