Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Invisible Comments

Rating: 4.8

invisible she lay
not seen by day
invisible to the sight and touch
if she died no one would care much
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tanesha davenport
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Rosalita Fernandez 11 March 2009

Brilliant- not much more i can say but truely brilliant

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Xy-za Dile 11 March 2009

this goes to my faves! beautiful write my dear =)

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Ana Guerrero 07 March 2009

Well I can also relate to this one. I think it could be longer yet you said a lot. Great job

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