Wednesday, July 16, 2008

Invisible Comments

Rating: 5.0

do you see me standing here?
or am i invisible again?
its so hard to hide these tears
they always come out in the end
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Kira Williams 25 November 2009

wow, and here i thought i was the only one who knew what this is like, im glad to see that there are more than just me...

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Patrick A. Martin 01 September 2009

Never fear Elizabeth ninty's coming up better things ahead... just stay away from them old guys.10 AGAIN

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James B. Earley 18 August 2008

There will be another bus...along....with lot more comfortable seats! Best wishes.

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Anna jonson 03 August 2008

very beautiful and sad keep going & good luck

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 July 2008

heart wishful laching on to the love of glimpse love seem to be befuddled by the shadow over the gleams....................very eloquently orchestyated, wonderful y luscious,10+, thanks for sharing

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 18 July 2008

Touching love poem...........

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Chris Newlash 16 July 2008

great read keep up the good work!

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