Invisible Comments

Existence is by recognition…recognition by others. Every one exists invisible to self… looking out for self frequently into the mirror of false hood… A beautiful poem pointing out to a stalk naked truth...that too from a thirteen year old! The child was to say ‘oh! the king is naked! ’ Wasn’t it?

invisible yet exists., nice piece mam

Only you could have written this unique piece, trust who you are, keep writing Helena. Shaun.

nice poem, i know exactly how that feels at times. i suppose everyone at times may feel this way at one point

i think that this is a awesome poem cuz everyone feels that way somethimes! NICE!