Yes i am invisible sometimes
And so are my rhymes
O to be invisible!
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Great poem. Very powerfull. Especially the verses referring to the fact that people can find you if only they seek you. It is reminds of God in a way. He is everywhere but can only be felt and found by people who are willing to find Him. Well done HBH
That's brilliant, really! You should be very proud of it, it's fantastic! : -) I really liked it