Monday, December 13, 2004

Invisible Comments

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Yes i am invisible sometimes
And so are my rhymes

O to be invisible!
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Jodie C 04 May 2005

That's brilliant, really! You should be very proud of it, it's fantastic! : -) I really liked it

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Ivy Christou 05 March 2005

Great poem. Very powerfull. Especially the verses referring to the fact that people can find you if only they seek you. It is reminds of God in a way. He is everywhere but can only be felt and found by people who are willing to find Him. Well done HBH

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 16 December 2004

Nice One.Thanks you.

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