Friday, April 6, 2007

Invisible Comments

Rating: 5.0

Its like i'm transparent,
it's all so apparent,
the way i feel about you,
you're just too good to be true,
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emily summers
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Soul Writer 27 May 2007

My heart sunk when i read this one emily..... David is right and you shouldnt look down on yourself so much espcially at you age. I join the others in thanking you for sharing your deepsest feeling and emotions here :)

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David Harris 06 April 2007

Emily, don't look down on yourself too much. This sort of thing happens to all of us. We all want someone that is just out of reach of us. I've had this happen many time to me. Beautiful flow to this poem. You start to read and it just drags you through it. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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