Sunday, January 17, 2016

Invisible Comments

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I can't stop chanting about the emptiness inside
It's like a broken record, a mantra of my pitiful life
wind passes right through me never had to hide
voices echo within me and nobody hears their cries
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Waseem Sherif
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Aarzoo Mehek 17 January 2016

We all are in the same boat Waseem, Inspite of the strong persona we all are little broken from inside.. The sensitive side of us makes us pen down the invisible pain. Very sensitive portrayal of pain. We all are heroes of our time fighting the hurdles of life. Lovely poem 10 plus

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Waseem Sherif 17 January 2016

thank you, Aarzoo. it is good to know that such invisible inner pain can be seen and understood by others.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 January 2016

After having long journey in life soul feels tiredness. This is very interesting definitely.10

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Waseem Sherif 17 January 2016

thank you, Kumarmani. it sure is tiring but we keep the words coming.

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