Thursday, September 26, 2019

Investigating The Unnecessary Me! Comments

Rating: 4.5

End of the theme is I am in struggle
Attacking it and being attacked in return
I am either simply in or damned out
The world is nakedly out there
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Aadil Hingorjo
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Lyn Paul 28 February 2020

Captivating and thought provoking. It did make me think of the current epidemic also. Keep writing and importantly, stay safe.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 February 2020

Cracks of life! ! War inside me! Able to overcome; Able to listen to my silence. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 February 2020

An excellent free verse! Many congratulations for this fabulous poem being featured today as POD!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 February 2020

A well composed poem of the day. Congrats on your featured piece......10+++++

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Aadil Hingorjo

Aadil Hingorjo

Sanghar, Sindh, Pakistan
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