Wednesday, September 12, 2018

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control spirals
twisting spider webs
encapsulating flies.
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Bri Edwards 12 October 2018

i refuse to comment further on a poem which contains a word containing more than 16 letters! ! ! but i can't help saying: i knew an Alice like this one once: EAT ME says Alice. Kumarmani says a brilliant poem. i DO NOT understand nor enjoy it...., perhaps 'cause i AIN'T brilliant! ! bri ;)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

A normal deed is a normal deed. This deeply impacts life. What is normal for the spider is chaos for the fly. Reception varies from person to person. A brilliant poem is excellently penned.10

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