Tuesday, July 1, 2014

Invention And Creation Comments

Rating: 4.5

Until you are shaken or jerked
You will not be woken up.

Till you get some sorrows and pain
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Amitava Sur
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Roseann Shawiak 19 September 2014

Your poem falls right along in line with pain and sorrow, as it helps to create and invent from an utter need in life. Adroitly written, Amitava. An excellent poem, a nice staccato rhythm, great perceptive as usual within your writing. Again it's a 10. Thank you, RoseAnn

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 July 2014

Very thoughtful poem. Very true said... Until you are shaken or jerked You will not be woken up. I loved reading each lines.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 July 2014

Nice and lovely thoughts, thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 02 July 2014

Very philosophical and true to the core! Greatly admire this perception of life!

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Amitava Sur

Amitava Sur

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