Until you are shaken or jerked
You will not be woken up.
Till you get some sorrows and pain
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Very thoughtful poem. Very true said... Until you are shaken or jerked You will not be woken up. I loved reading each lines.
Very philosophical and true to the core! Greatly admire this perception of life!
Your poem falls right along in line with pain and sorrow, as it helps to create and invent from an utter need in life. Adroitly written, Amitava. An excellent poem, a nice staccato rhythm, great perceptive as usual within your writing. Again it's a 10. Thank you, RoseAnn