Thursday, July 28, 2011

Invasion Comments

Rating: 2.8

Of course the impure
Bring the war to the pure
Body strikes deep into the soul
Of course anger is dirty
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Aqeb Benazir 19 August 2011

'Of course anger is dirty It fills the spirit with filth Of course invasion destroys Steel rusts in disbelief' Really Nice piece with great context! btw, these lines rhyme better together! !

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Allemagne Roßmann 15 August 2011

The poem with its proses invaded the mind.Well done.

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