Across the room he turned to stand and stare at her,
She felt her soul stripped bare by this striking stranger.
No longer conscious of knowing her present location,
Yet sensing this intrusive inspection, she felt such elation.
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So beautiful, I felt as though I was living the moment, very vivid description and so romantic. You have talent! Lilly :)
A perfect delivery of a romantic encounter, captured in the moment...Nicely done, young lady! FjR
I feel like I'm intruding on this exciting and passionate moment of yours. This is written so well, so little yet speaks volumes from the heart....marci.m.xo
A deeply touching and beautiful piece of work Ernestine, written from the heart. Love, Andrew x