Thursday, October 27, 2016

Intruder Comments

Rating: 4.3

The winter pushed in, to my door,
Freezing cold penetrated to my toes,
Crept up...
To the shin, thighs, belly,
...
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Bisy Untan
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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 November 2017

In the heart it froze as a heavy stone. In my loneliness, I cried, Where are you? - The lucid flow of your writing is absolutely amazing..! A very commendable piece of work..!

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 November 2016

Loneliness! In the gloom. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Valsa George 04 November 2016

Climate really affects our moods.... In sunny weather, we feel bright and sprightly, but in chilly, dull weather and during rainy season, one feels all the more lonely! However in the blasts of winter, what gives us hope are the thoughts about the arrival of a spring! Fine write! Thanks for sharing!

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