Journey into depth of soul,
slippery slope or mere hell-hole;
taken despite wary warning
finds may cause massive mourning.
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it is INTROSPECTIONS in SOLITUDE that lead us to the DEATH of ALL PAST and REBIRTH of the PRESENT HERE and NOW.......... Nice poem, Ms.Roshni. am NEW here and thnx for your visit to my DEBUT poem warm regards -shree
Your finds causes my massive mourning. I just love it.
two of my good friend commented below.. they good the words out my mouth
Another excellent write Roshni, well chosen words for what you wanted to convey. I enjoyed this and it will go in my favorites for its message and construction. Great job. Susan
Raped by my own regret; insulted by my intellect; -------- Great work and unique poetic lines that are striking to the readers mind...Great read i had...10
really a powerful and evocative description of looking at one's self and having to explore the pain of the conscious and unconscious.....
this poem has very powerful imagery. you get your point across well.
a hard journey indeed...good introspection here, Roshni...thanks 10
A rhythmic but revolting, a terse but in-depth introspection! Best wishes.