Introspection-07 Comments
O dear, my beloved
you are beautiful
like the natural sky and innate horizon,
like the green mountain and wood,
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Beauty in its crystallised form has no physical body, but it is the essence and core of all that is lovely, virtuous and covetable. It is not tangible but an abstract reality! You have penetrated into the core of inner beauty! A profound write that deserves full marks!
Truly He is not manifest, it is man that gives Him form, colours, and clothes. Man has to transcend senses (indriyas) to see Him. You've referred to this indirectly, well done.
Beautiful poem Mahta..I especially like your use of simiile...it's a ten from me!
Loved, Beloved! Muse of love and art. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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7/27/2025 1:53:35 AM # 1.0.0
O dear, my beloved you are beautiful but you said you had NO BELOVED WHERE HAS SHE COME FROM NOW AND ALL YOUR COMMENTS ARE BEAUTIFULLY COMPOSED COLLECT THEM FROM MY PROSE AND REPOST MB OF BD U R GREAT POEM TREE