Introspection-04 Comments

In a way we are all travellers on this Earth! We come empty handed with no baggage. But in course of time we amass a lot by stealing and looting others. Finally we come to the realization that we are not able to carry anything back as we make our return trip. Then we regret over our faulty actions and hope that God might, in His mercy, forgive us. But do we have any reason to be forgiven! A question we have to ask ourselves. A very introspective write, Mahtab!

There is a fine balance in this verse...The relationship with the physical world, the present. The introspection evolves into the tie with the hereafter. Perhaps we are the bridge that ties the two...Such an amazing poem. Magnificent.

I believe the creator is almighty, omnipresent/He can do anything/He is the supreme judge/justice is His constitution.......sublime expression! A great work.......10

Rich introspection, as someone said, the effect of rains. Yes, God does not interfere and lets the laws of Nature take over. The Karmic Law is so powerful it comes into effect automatically.

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Every traveller! ! Every act, Adventures on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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A powerful write. Brilliant!

Great introspection in the life of One traveler.