Friday, April 13, 2018

Introduction Comments

Rating: 5.0

We were not so close but we were not too far
I don't know how the current of friendship induced
Just connected on a website, but never met.
To each other, we are yet to be introduced!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Loke Kok Yee 14 April 2018

Your friendship through these pages travels far, Your poems melodious like a sitar And light up our lives like twinkling stars Thank you sir

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Kelly Kurt 13 April 2018

You are a thinker. I appreciate that. Friendship outpaces any form of limbic love. I love you, Akhtar!

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Khalid Saifullah 13 April 2018

An amazing and outstanding poem, a wonderful write.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 April 2018

A striking title and the rest of the work is just wonderful. Another marvelous piece from the golden pen of a great poet. The last stanza is of great depth. Lines that are so heartwarming. You should feel proud of this masterly crafted write.10

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Indira Renganathan 13 April 2018

Last four lines excel....true and meaningful words....a lovely work

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 April 2018

Akhtar ji, it is another best poem in your pen. Introduction is necessary yet.......in your pen...... We both are natives of the same dream land An island in the vast ocean of emotions and sentiments, One may take it only as a piece of blood and flush For us, it's larger and denser than the continents! Thanks for sharing.

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Gajanan Mishra 13 April 2018

same dream land, poetic, good write

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