Intro..Soilchild Comments

From dust we come and to dust we return What matters is what we do in the time we have

I like how you let it flow, lightly with passion for the theme... Soilchild - born to die with its immortal name... great write :)

Beautiful and lovely poem, true we all are a child from the soil, of the soil as in God's creation man was created by God through the soil and women from the ribs of a man, then there was man and woman...We all withered go back to dust where we belong but our names will remain in the memories of our love ones...10 from me.

i like the poem a lot though it is short, but it is all poetry and that is rare to see.

Powerful words. The legacy of a life well lived is awesome. Kee writing.

My name will forever remain in memories good line. you did a great job on this one... I enjoyed reading it a lot. good job. Becca

so beautifully expressed in a thought provoking way 10/10